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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-11-17 12:46 PM

I'm gonna dive off this bridge and fly,
far, far, far away from here.
Standing where the sun shines all day,
and darkness calls at night.

Fly Fly Fly away,
up into my destiny.
I see you there,
my Prince, my Peace,
and pretty shining armor.

I'm gonna dance, dance the night away,
waltzing across the floor.
Where forever stands alone,
and all my fears take flight.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2004-11-17 01:00 AM

[QUOTE]Where forever stands alone,
and all my fears take flight.[QUOTE]

My favorite two lines in this poem, possibly my favorite quote ever. Perfect ending to this poem, I think. Keep it UP

!

[center]"I'm burning in the heavens,
and I'm drowning in a hell.
And my soul is in a coma
and none of my friends can tell,"
[i]~Take Me~ Papa Roca

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

2 posted 2004-11-17 01:19 AM

"Are your tears in need of drying?
Is your heart in need of love?
The kind you just can never find,
Heaven-sent from up above

Carried down on angels' wings
Whispered in songs the ocean sings

Feels like the warmth of sweet sunshine
And gets sweeter with age, like strawberry wine

Rides to your rescue on a galloping horse
And leaves you breathless, longing for more...

You know where to find it,
You know where I'll be,
Remember my love,
and Think of me..."

" Now what do you THINK about that? "

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-11-17 07:23 PM

"I'm gonna dance, dance the night away,
waltzing across the floor.
Where forever stands alone,
and all my fears take flight."

omg! I love this...especially this last stanza! Awesome job!!

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2004-11-19 08:13 AM

wow this is amazing hun. great right!
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

5 posted 2004-11-19 12:59 PM

All of you provided such sweet responses. I am glad that you all enjoyed this piece.

With love,
Kellie

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