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Whats Wrong? |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US 
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Whats Wrong? How can I explain this? When I don't know what it is, I'm there all the time- And notice you too But you pay no attention to me What is wrong with me? Do you hate me? Not like me? I need to know what is wrong with ME?! It seems you only notice me When you want something from me The first time was just a hook-up, I knew that. But the second was different I saw it in you! But its over and so am I Because you think something's wrong with me I really do like you, But can never get through, You're always too busy To just sit and talk to me Its fine if you wanna be friends, But nothing more So if thats what you choose Then don't come running to me when you're lonely Cuz I don't wanna sit here Wondering what's wrong with me! ------------- As you can tell, I had my heart crushed after me and a friend hooked up. NEVER DO IT!!! lol Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
do you like this poem? ~Express Yourself~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Bailey there's nothing wrong with you!  Very emotional write...very expressive.  And thanx for helping me with the poem!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
The answer to your question whether or not I liked it: no, I think it is one of the worst poems I have EVER written! But the real question is Do YOU like it? lol..... thanks alli! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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