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Blueprints With No Scale
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Blueprints With No Scale |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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Blueprints With No Scale The night sky can burn To the sound of old guitars And tired eyes turned up In disgust for themselves. Peeling wax in frothing bars Falls faster as the fire Stares into the mirrors above, They reflect darkness. Where the heart meets soul Is where meets spill And where pain knows names Is where cold hands grasp warmth. Consume me, Consumate me, Burn me, Leave scars Roadsigns to tell once more The hindsight in yesterday, Predicting the history of tomorrow. And the music s again Even as it falls away to be forgotten. Will you forget me? Night sky, will you forgive me? |
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earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
i wont critize you, how can i? poetry is a piece of you, as individual and unique as a fingerprint. If you can find the style that best express yourself to others in a poem, your poetry will be greatly appreciated... i find myself lost in your poetry, ... a jumbled and pieced reality... i dont understand it. express yourself, your desire as a artist... make others understand you, your mission as an inspirator! great talent wih words you have. keep writing. " Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. " |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
hmmm...not quite sure what you are saying. most of my stuff is abstract but follows a guide in my head. |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
im a big fan of freestyle poetry myself. and i like rhyming, as well as wordplay. ~Express Yourself~ |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
i'm glad you like it. |
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