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Sweetest Sorrow X
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From a cradle to a casket

0 posted 2004-11-07 12:12 PM



It was interrupted, this creative burst.

I sat awkwardly and realized the axis spins and spins, denying my control.


I try to set it in my own rotation.


Everything turns out of whack and I'm carried along for the ride.

You say you are the creator of your own destiny.
I spin the globe and close my eyes.


And always land on home.

I choose my company by the beating of their hearts

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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
1 posted 2004-11-13 08:49 PM


hey that was a cool one. think ill quote you on that

"i spin the globe and close my eyes, and always land on home!"

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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
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2 posted 2004-11-24 04:21 PM


woah...
I love the theme this holds.
so short. so profound.

*Alli4000*
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3 posted 2004-11-24 06:50 PM


short yet amazing....

~Alli~

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electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 184
far away from home.
4 posted 2004-11-24 07:35 PM



this left me with a lasting
impression. beautiful//

-kelly

remember to breathe after you exhale.

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever
5 posted 2004-11-24 09:18 PM


hehe thats fun to do
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