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...Whats Lost Will Go Unnoticed... |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131
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Am I just so lost that you will never find me I exist but I'm not here I don't know you but I am waiting It could be, but it's not A look in my direction My hopeful heart I catch myself falling For what I know nothing of Another day passes I watch with eyes sealed tight I feel when you walk by Queit distance kept Admiring endless flaws I know your used to this Maybe I could be different Will you ever see me Or am I nothing again? I see me frowning in your eyes... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Am I just so lost that you will never find me I exist but I'm not here" "Will you ever see me Or am I nothing again?" I loved those two parts! You are an amazing writer and you have so much talent! This is a great write! ~Alli~ Btw, I love your name (alison)...power to the allisons! lol.  Also, look at that! You've got my 900th post!!!  YAY!*:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Very different way to write a love poem, I love it! I especially love the lines, "I feel when you walk by, quiet distance kept." Great work. Thanks for sharing. But Im comforted |
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earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
beautiful, and unique " Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. " |
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