Teen Poetry #7 |
Naught But Driftwood |
HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Nothing but a drifter Drifting in and out of life Eyes all bright with glitter The unshed tears of strife Always seeking lonely souls Eager to lend a helping hand Always playing roles A human rubber band Comfort to the weary All I’ve ever been A shoulder for the teary Taking confession of darkest sin Love they always claim As their feelings true I guess I’m to blame, I guess I always knew That love it was not Just a rebirth within An absence of rot And yet I always begin To love in return Believing untruth That they won’t burn, But instead sooth The tormented heart Living within Torn all apart By my own sin I should have realized It’s not a drifter’s lot To be truly prized; To have what I have not For I’m naught but driftwood Destined only to rot is knowing where I've been ~Rich~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Rich! I just popped in to this Teen Forum and wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this write! Excellent..very well written. ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
i really like this. although i'm not usually one for rhyming poems, this seemed to have great flow. i hope you keep on writing. and thanks for the comments on my poetry. =) -kelly i could be an accident, but i'm still trying. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Richard~ Your title drew me in ... and I was pleased with the all of this piece~ Thank you for sharing~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
awesome write...great flow...so much emotion...and I loved the ending! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Like one of your replies, your title drew me in. Nice flow, nice work! ~Jess "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." -Jimi Hendrix |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Very well written piece Rich. enjoyed !! ~myheart~ |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I really love this one alot! It's very descriptive, and sad. Great way to end it. Im glad you're still posting. But Im comforted |
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earthdust Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 53predestined and foreknown |
i am pleased with your work here... " Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. " |
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