so much for run on sentences (3)

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so much for run on sentences (3)

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2004-10-22 01:20 PM

He was, of course, walking backward
toward something, away from
everything I had previously said
stated not so much in words
I reflect pictures

And your eyes are blind to me

Desolate, she cared
once upon a never ever after
and I am stranded

He would prefer abandoned
mighty knight in shining armor now
never let her fly above you
sentence her to drowning
in the clouds below your wings

And I would fall

I am left alone
somewhere around you
and how you kidnapped
everything I gave you
nothing in return

She despises you
your run on sentences
her inability to vocalize
the wishes of a smoldering princess
falling into Rapunzel's castle
you will never see her again.

[This message has been edited by Allysa (10-23-2004 10:10 PM).]

electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

1 posted 2004-10-22 06:08 PM

wow, i absolutely love this. i
almost saw myself somewhere in
this piece.

beautiful job, keep writing.

-kelly

i could be an accident, but i'm still trying.

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