Teen Poetry #7 |
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The Most Beautiful Nights |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN ![]() |
Here's a song for my band. the style is acoustic. our vocals sound much like somethng corporate. the guitar is closer to Dave Matthews picking. enjoy. please leave critiques! The Most Beautiful Nights what a lovely night my dear, It's made simple only by the dark. what a way to keep you here, Leaving all of you alone. It's the most beautiful nights That make me the loneliest, But I'm better off at home. It's the quiet times at midnight That turn your whisper into fear, But it's better off unknown. what a lovely night my dear, It's made simple only by the dark. what a way to keep you here, Leaving all of you alone. It's the loneliest nights That make you so beautiful, And we're better off at home. It's at midnight when The quiet holds our hands soft and slow into unknown. what a lovely night my dear, It's made simple only by the dark. what a way to keep you here, Leaving all of you alone. So please don't drive me away Cuz I don't think I'd wake again, And don't scream out my name Cuz screams come at the end. what a lovely night my dear, It's made simple only by the dark. what a way to keep you here, Leaving all of you alone. now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
hmm...i dont like it that no one has replied to this. It was really good... I swear, that makes me so mad when people do that. Anyways...Like i said before, this was an awesome write, and i could almost picture it. The music for this must be amazing... Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
i can just imagine how awesome this will sound with music. i'm sure it will turn out great. keep on writing. --kelly i could be an accident, but i'm still trying. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thank you both for the encouragement. if there's anything you guys think should be changed, let me know. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
great stuff, songwriter **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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