..I made you close your eyes. And you know what was coming.

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Teen Poetry #7

..I made you close your eyes. And you know what was coming.

Sweetest Sorrow X
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since 2004-01-19

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From a cradle to a casket

0 posted 2004-10-16 11:59 AM

This is wrote from a boys perspective..even though i am..a Girl. haha.

Knock knock knock.

Knock knock

Knock.

I stood there feeling quite disappointed.

My flowers still perked up all proud and ready, their red and yellows waiting for her face.

Even as they fell onto the porch they looked hopeful.

Ready to impress.

The hands on my watch ticked and ticked.

I didn't see the point in going to the dance.

My clothes crumpled and even my outfit looked defeated.

The hands on my watch spun and you and your date danced smiling.

Spun as you lay drunkenly on the floor.

Some random headlights came down the road.

The loud crunching of gravel as they turned into the drive.

You stepped out.

Your dress was all turned around and the buttons were all amiss and everything was obvious.

I looked up at you with eyes glazed over.

The words just hung in my throat, worthless.

You looked down on my and even your body smelled like something gone wrong.

"What are you still doing here?"

What a perfect sentence to break the sudden subtle sad silence her presense had made.

I looked at my watch and got up, with nothing left to say.

I believe that lovers should be tied together and thrown into the ocean in the worst of weather and left there to drownin their innocence

*Alli4000*