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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
we all fall down, but some fall, harder than others, i can't see the sunshine, only the rain. glance around, there's no one around, just to see just how far down, i can fall. i can fall. without landing, on anything softer than, death and pain. i don't want to waste away again, i've revived myself before! why can't i today? it would be so much easier to cry, but i'll always smile for you, no matter how much i hurt inside. -bergundy- "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"it would be so much easier to cry, but i'll always smile for you, no matter how much i hurt inside." Liked the ending, and enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing, and I hope to read more of you!   ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I really liked this. I especially liked the ending also. Great job. Thanks for sharing. WinterWren- |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
"it would be so much easier to cry, but i'll always smile for you, no matter how much i hurt inside." I loved the ending! This is a great poem, I'm putting in my library! * For all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are those, "It might have been." * |
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