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Adam Alexander Junior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 11Home... |
You and I were much alike Lost, confused, worthless. I found you and saw a porpose, someone who could change my life. You did. But because of the things YOU did.. The lies, the guilt, the REGRETS. You made me stronger than you. Smarter than you, higher than you. Better than you could ever know. I'm not pretending to be someone I'm not. I'm being who I am, who I always should have been. Now we're apexal diametricals. While you're still you, I'm worth something now. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Yeah, you tell em'!  I like this, it makes me wanna stand up and yell...lol i like this. very straightforward, and to the point... Kant wait to hear more. Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
wow felt the emotions coming out of this one, very nice write! can't wait to see more from you! -Erin Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Nice. "I tried so hard...But in the end...It doesn't even matter...."~Linkin Park |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Adam...awesome poem. "But because of the things YOU did.. The lies, the guilt, the REGRETS. You made me stronger than you. Smarter than you, higher than you. Better than you could ever know." Like Karissa said...YOU TELL THEM! lol.. Great write...post more soon!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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