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Emotional Roller Coaster
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Emotional Roller Coaster |
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PurplePeopleEater Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 11 |
this is pretty much about my last boyfriend...a lot of stuff still inside that i needed to get out after about 6 months I act like everything is normal I act like everything is okay What you did is not normal It was never okay Your absence was embraced Those three months I treasured To have it end with a sorry In a meaningless, drunken haze I’m still not okay Everything is not normal You hurt me in the worst possible way A way I will keep forever You said we wouldn’t work Because you’re a soldier now A man of war The kind who could never love My first love died so quick, so abrupt I want to forget, move on but I can’t I don’t love you nor do I like you For some reason I still care, I always will Random hellos that annoy on the outside Bring a peace inside that’s unexplainable I love to hate you yet I hate to lose you You’re the biggest jerk I know Don’t say hi, don’t even give a glance I need to move on in isolation Go away, don’t look back I can’t stand the past, it’s killing me inside I forgive you yet I still don’t like you |
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IHaveADeepLOVE4POETRY1995 New Member
since 2008-11-26
Posts 2 |
That was pretty good keep up the great work. |
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Kateyshine911 New Member
since 2008-11-20
Posts 4 |
that is a very moving poem. I LOVE IT. |
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nina1522 Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189 |
very nice poem but i think the words could flow a little better. but i truly loved it |
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