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Not to much to say, cause none of it matters
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Not to much to say, cause none of it matters |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain 
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i just realized im a foolish little girl with big dreams and too small of a heart for others, not caring except for me. i care only about myself all the time day and night not caring about others i wish i had known so we wouldn't fight im sorry i really am i know i say that too much that it doesn't even matter now you really don't care what i say you said that once to me "so is everything else you say you say it just to say it" and i realize now you're right i was so wrong before i wish i could ask forgivness but i cant can i? because you won't believe me what a mess im in right now. is there any way you would believe me? no, no there isn't you've left me behind with oh so much to fix but nothing can be fixed without your approval come back to me please help me once more im nothing without yuo just pieces on the floor waiting to be swept up and thrown in the garbage where i belong. pick me up save them the trip take me to the trash and again, dump me there. so once more just in case before im with things like me such as thrown at rotten things im sorry. |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I really enjoyed this.. it started off really good. it was a little little bit confusing in one area like it went off subject and then back on but it was really good. ~heather` Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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nina1522 Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189 |
a truly good piece. i can deffinately relate to it. good job |
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