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TheGirlNoOneKnew
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0 posted 2004-09-09 10:06 PM


Bedtime stories and fluffy comforters
the essence of childhood had dawned,
my youth hid my blissful ignorance
for I was always mommy's little girl.

Barbie dolls and sing-a-longs
coloring books swept with hearts,
we could solve any puzzle together
because we always worked as a team.

My little pony and piggyback rides,
cassette tapes filled with lullabies
and I would fall asleep in your lap
dreaming all my dreams away.

Skinned knees and bruised hearts,
you can't put a band-aid on this anymore
mother you can't fix this mistake,
you can't undo what has already been done.

Betrayal of the worst kind and wet tears
that is all I have come to know lately,
because I am not your little girl anymore
and you are but a stranger in my home.


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AtLsHawTy17
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since 2004-09-07
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1 posted 2004-09-10 12:51 PM


omg that was awesome, thats totally how i feel wit my mom im not her lil girl no more and she cant fix what ive done you know i love this poem

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me

*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2004-12-25 06:00 PM


I can relate to this so much! Thanks for sharing!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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