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AtLsHawTy17
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 60
IL,

0 posted 2004-09-07 08:51 PM

Someday she'll understand
All the hurt she's been through
Someday she'll finally see
Why she cried so hard over you

Someday she'll know why
Their friendship fell apart
Someday the tears may stop
and She won't have a broken heart

Someday life will be known
and She'll know the reason she was born
Someday she'll smile
and Understand sometimes you need to be torn

Someday she'll forget
That the pain was even there
Someday she'll be alright
and Someone will be there to care

Someday someone will call
and She'll answer the phone
Someday her heart will be whole again
and She won't be all alone

Someday her soul will mend
and Real happiness won't go away
Someday she will know
That everything will be okay...

Someday.

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

1 posted 2004-09-07 08:56 PM

I am absolutly speechless. This is one of the best poems I've read in awhile, the rhyming didn't seemed forced and this had such a great message, one that I really needed to hear. Wow, awesome job, I'm going to keep this if you don't mind.

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-09-08 08:12 PM

DAMN...this was amazing. YOu are an awesome writer. I loved it, just like i loved ur last one.

I cant wait to hear more.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

3 posted 2004-09-09 12:09 PM

wow! i love it!!! i am still waiting for my "someday" to come...
i cant believe more people havent posted to this!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-12-25 06:05 PM

WOW!!! This poem was sad, but totally awesome! Great job!

~Alli~

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