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...Fall For You...
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...Fall For You... |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131
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Fall For You Just where are you now, you disappeared somewhere, Wishing for my friend back only to find that your not there, This wasn't supposed to happen, friends don't act like this, Who would have ever known, things would change with just one kiss, You were always there for me, calmed each and every fear, Taking the pain away from me, dried up all my tears, Found comfort in your arms and took away my thoughts of him, You picked up from where he left off and knew just where to begin, I didn't want, I couldn't help falling for my friend, Denied the fact, hid the truth, didn't want what we had to end, What was wrong felt so right and we didn't hold back, It was already there for us, no room left to act, I didn't get too close, realizing this feeling couldn't stay You were never too far, until you made it go away, Took everything I ever knew and everything that could ever be, I feel like I've lost my closest friend, you ran away from me, It never should have got this far, you were always by my side, Now I don't know where you are, you can't hold me when I cry, The story is a little different, and your timing is a little late, It's not the same to wipe away the tears that you create, I didn't want it to mean that much, I didn't want to care, Never really got that far, but far enough to find your not there, All the pain you took away, You replaced it once again, All the hurt I feel today, Sadly reminds me of him, I tried so hard to forget the past, falling for you along the way, You were never there to catch me, you never promised that you'd stay, I never wanted to hurt, but I can't control the things I do, You never meant to hurt me...and I never meant to fall for you... I see me frowning in your eyes... |
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AtLsHawTy17 Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60IL, |
i love it so much, it was so good i can totally relate i loved the last line |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
thanks...the feeling is all too real I see me frowning in your eyes... |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT. Keep it up girl. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
...wow...i think i am gonna cry. It is so weird, how this poem...its like you are in my head or something. I am going through something so much like this it is crazy. Except, it is my fault things got the way they did...I got scared...and he got defensive..and it was just a mess, and it really sucks. I know what ur going through. And you put it down amazingly. Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
wow....I didn't know this many people could relate...time heals everything..one day I'll have my friend back I see me frowning in your eyes... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I can realte too....  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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