the oldest cliche, my newest obsession

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Teen Poetry #7

the oldest cliche, my newest obsession

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-09-02 06:37 PM

the oldest cliche, my newest obsession

I roll the windows down to dim the tint
into a lighter shade of midnight,
so the features of shadows shake into blurs.
The wind brings millions of unspoken words to my mind;
fortunately my skin has chilled to just above freezing,
rivaling my heart for the coldest summer record.
And right now i'm chafing my eyes,
those tears never seem to come out dry...

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-09-02 10:22 PM

hmm...this one i had to read more than once...

It made me think about things (most of your poems do)

I really like this. I think i will save it.

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2004-09-04 12:38 PM

oooooooo!
I love that, man.

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2004-09-06 09:36 AM

thanks a lot guys. anymore comments?

earthdust
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since 2003-10-28

Posts 53
predestined and foreknown

4 posted 2004-11-13 11:06 PM

yeah i like this one too.

" Understanding is more valuable than diamonds. If you can understand me, Then you are a very rich person. "

TY!

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

5 posted 2004-11-13 11:17 PM

good, please keep reading.

LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

6 posted 2004-11-14 01:35 AM

i must say i am jealous, u have such amazing talent...i really enjoyed this one, as i did with all or your poems...take care.

~suicide is not so much the wish to die as it is the fear of living~

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

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Sparks, NV

7 posted 2004-11-16 12:09 PM

so sad yet so beautiful. like i've said before so little words can say so much. great poem hun. i really loved it.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

8 posted 2004-11-16 05:29 PM

thank you all again for replying.

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