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Teen Poetry #7

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tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-10-17 07:18 PM

It's like being on a diet
you open your refrigerator
and see that ice cream.

It's like everything around you is going so bad
you walk inside a gas station and see a carton of cigarettes sitting there.

Its like scrolling through your phone booke
you see that OnE person's name
and you want to call but know they arent there.

I'm addicted to you.

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

1 posted 2005-10-27 11:45 PM

I can relate. I like this one.

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intention
Member

since 2005-11-13

Posts 59
New Delhi, INDIA

2 posted 2005-11-13 04:10 PM

i dont have words to describe how much i like this poem of urs
amazing
keep it up

Love me for who i m

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

4 posted 2005-11-13 07:37 PM

Hey Hun!!
You still write wonderfully and I've missed ya lots. Talk to you soon! Keep up the good work!!

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

5 posted 2005-11-13 10:37 PM

thanks for the comments!

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

4christ13
New Member

since 2005-11-25

Posts 4
Georgia, United States

6 posted 2005-11-25 06:39 PM

I can't explain how good that this poem was.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

7 posted 2005-11-26 06:36 PM

thanks

DejaEntendu
Member

since 2005-12-06

Posts 82
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2005-12-07 10:12 PM

hi
thanks for your comment. I went through a few of your poems, and decided to comment on this one, I really liked it. Very simple, but incredibly easy to relate to. Hope to read more of your poetry in the future
thank you

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

9 posted 2005-12-13 06:25 PM

thanks!

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