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laughlovelivv
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since 2005-12-09
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0 posted 2005-12-09 03:40 PM



.:-_~*MOONLIGHT*~_-:.

I sit in the dark corner,
And look at the shadowed picture,
of you, that i crumbled in my pocket,
The night before was great,
But now i see a blurr,
It started out with happiness,
But now i'm stuck with tears,
You left me with a tissue box,
And a broken heart,
Now the lump inside my stomach,
Returns, as it did last time,
I know we might never speak agian,
But until the day,
You sew my heart back together,
The last dance will always be yours..

--all original..LIVV


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-12-09 03:48 PM


like the last line especially...

and aren't all our writings original? just curious~~

M

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
2 posted 2005-12-13 06:24 PM


oh my i agree the last verse is great keep writing
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