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wool sweater and a minds eye
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wool sweater and a minds eye |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going 
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Peace and a little bacon grease will make a mighty fine slip n' slide into the mind of a predecessor long forgotten with in the folds of time's lonely quilt ancient methods and masterings have proven more than enough for a simple modern mind to comprehend. So much yet so little in common Could it be that human beings have lost the ability to think? the minds of many set and are content with atrophy while the oppressive powers at be soak and perfect each mind to their standard of "Knowledge" standardised beings are we choice taken only to be substituted with commands and obedience those insubordinate are silenced swiftly or taken as insane individuals to the standardised society was the brain ever meant to think? was it created for commands? freedom of speech the freedom to think free will has been taken, manipulated, and nicknamed freedom if only this wool sweater could be removed from society's mind's eye then freedom could ring. freedom of choice sexual, regligious, speech, or idea all would be as they were meant to be all would be as our predecessors, our fathers of freedom long past had meant them to be... free. nice use of muffin |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
well, written. i'm not too into these political poems, but this one was entertaining. good write. i liked the vey start best. |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
thank you very much for the comment |
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