Teen Poetry #7 |
The Wings of a Bird |
tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
The sun rises, colors bright and shining. The clouds, color them amazing, as though straight from a painting. Birds fly above me, graceful, beautiful. Without thier wings to gluide they wouldn't be birds. It would not allow them to see the amazing, unforgettable and unseen by humans. Nor would I be able to live without my wings, you. You are my wings which I gluide. I've seen things amazing, unforgettable, something most don't see, they let it pass them by. They call it love. I walk away from the sunrise, colors beautiful, knowing that like the wings of a bird, you complete me. -Erin Hey guys, let me know what you think! Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
So maybe this isn't your best work, but why hasn't anyone replied to it?!!? "Knowing that like the wings of a bird, you complete me." This was my favortie part. Keep Writing Erin! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Happy Holidays! |
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