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Foggy emotions...
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Foggy emotions... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
The fog comes in, all hazy and grey. I'll never forget what happened that day. You told me you loved me, and held me tight. YOu said you'd never let go, never let me out of your sight.... But we all know the story, we all know the drill. You lied and you hurt me, you went in for the kill. Deep down i knew, that i was being used. I didnt wanna beleive, what i knew to be true. And the fog comes in, more hazy, more grey. I'll never forget what happened... that next day. I was torn, and i was tattered, my heart was broken, my soul shattered. I cryed and i cried, till my tears swept me away. i cried myself a river, throughout the very next day. But as the fog leaves now, less hazy, less grey, i'll always remember, the pain i went through that day. ~Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
You should have comments! Grrr lol This poem was really good. I can relate very very much. Good work. ~Jess  "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." -Jimi Hendrix |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"But we all know the story, we all know the drill. You lied and you hurt me, you went in for the kill." yes, I know that story.... sorry you do too...  |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautifully written kissa.... as you know im goin thru the same thing.... well written and beautifully excecuted...... i hope your heart doesnt take too long to heal this wound..... keep your head high and options open... i know i am....  Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I can always relate to your poems! Merry Christmas!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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