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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Second Thoughts Thoughts of lonliness flood my soul. Just ending it once and for all, seems like the perfect plan. I dont have much further to fall, as the blood drips from my hand. I dont think, i just do it. I've got nothing else to lose. The pill make me go numb. Conciousness i refuse. I can feel my heart beat slower, with every breath i take. Suddenly i'm having second thoughts, but it's already too late. With only one choice, I have chosen my fate. I am here to tell you, it's not too late for you. There are so many good things in the world, things i never got to do. So go into the world, and open up your eyes. You never know what you'll find, you might jsut find a blessing in disguise. * I wrote this when i was going through a hard time with family and friends.. and i felt really.. alone. I don not support suicide in any way, and this is not meant to encourage it, or support it in any way. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
the first two stanzas were on my warning levels lol....but the last few really did give off a good message. Sometimes we learn the most through the hardest situations. I know I have. I have been through hells beyond, and have come back all the more stronger. Being a teen was definitely one of the hardest times in my life....so much growing and learning in such a little time- but its worth it.......the pain, the laughs, the sorrow, the smiles...all of it. I learned a lot and I am who I am because of it. Good poem. You really touched on a lot of things and brought back some awful (lol) yet growing memories for me. keep posting  -jAVI- I left my wallet in El Segundo... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
thanx... i appreciate it. Kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
That is a really deep poem. Life really stinks sometimes/. I hope life is better for you, remember you only have one life to live and its important to live it well with all of the integerty and truth you poses, because regardless if poeple look back or not, you don't want to be the one with the bad impact on the world. Juju |
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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon |
hey hun-*- This poem was amazing...all of yours are lol im jealous I can never wait to hear more...Life gets tough sometimes but you have to get through the rain to see the rainbow-*- later sunshine! hope your happier now all the best~ -*-broken-*- -*-I’ve been sleeping with the lights on So if I wake in the night Your picture is clearly in sight-*- |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Another amazing write by you! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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