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Teen Poetry #7

I haTE the way you love me!!

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

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0 posted 2004-07-09 06:10 PM

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Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

[This message has been edited by sweet_cute_palestinian04 (07-11-2004 01:35 AM).]

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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1 posted 2004-07-10 11:10 PM

hmmm....wow...i feel a lot of anger in this poem. In these lines especially:

"I hate you more than anything in this world"

What did this person do to you for you to hate him so much?

~Alli~

I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh, but I never knew looking back on the laughter would make me cry.

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