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The Fear
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The Fear |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
Someday I was lonely, no one care about me am i anger, am I crying or am i sad no one care about me it was the way of lonely and fear something happened confused me, don’t know what’s it is it the death is it the love or the sound of fear and lonely in new form I am absolutely confusing the life becomes a death and the death becomes a life no doubt about that its clear now hey hey, I’m not lone any more alot of people around much of trees, and palms there, and others i have never seen is it a forest, i don’t know i found, what i was looking for, i will be always beside, i feel, the warm i smile, the fragrances i touch, the kind i sense, the life i see, who i love i found you in the life, i loved you in the life but i will marry you here A CLEAR LOVE IS ENDLESS Have you known who is the person and whats the place, the person is my lover and the place is the paradies I hope to marry you in both lif and paradies |
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Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
it was pretty good, i could tell u put feeling into it, nice write  ~*.:Leah:.*~ |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Oh.... thats a neet poem. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nice poem . . . I feel alot of emotions, and I can tell that you put a lot of thought into it. KEEP WRITING!!  ~Alli~ |
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