Teen Poetry #7 |
a song for you |
tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
I want you; I need you; I miss you; I love you; I want to feel your kiss. I need to hear your voice. I miss your arms around me. I love you every day of the week. I want you; I need you; I miss you; I love you; I want you to need me. I need you to miss me. I miss you loving me. I love you wanting me. I want you; I need you; I miss you; I love you; yeah its repetative cause its a song... kinda... wow... tell me what you think good or bad. LOVE NEEDS TO DIE |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
i liked the next to last grouping, " I want you to need me. I need you to miss me. I miss you loving me. I love you wanting me." i thought it was cool how you used the last word to roll into the next line. Cool read thanks "Do not go gentle into that good night, |
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