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BeckzBoo
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since 2005-07-14
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0 posted 2005-10-02 12:53 PM


Your fight has finally end,
But it's not the way I wanted it to end.
It was too much for you to handle,
You were only 19.
It still doesn't seem real,
It's just like it's a bad dream.
The tears I have cried,
Have all been for you.
We were close, of course we were cousins!
But I wish we could have been closer.
They're many things I wish I could have said,
These are gonna be the hardest days,
But we can get through it,
You would have wanted it that way.
I hope your happier now,
No more pain, no more fear.
But now we have the pain to deal with,
This is the toughest thing i've ever done.
But it makes me feel better knowing,
Your in a much better place.
And I hope you know,
We will never stop loving you,
We could only ever love you more.
We'll get through this day by day,
Someway.


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Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
1 posted 2005-10-09 04:53 PM


thanks for the read...a good heartfelt piece, i'm truly sorry for your loss but hopefully we'll see some more posts from you

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

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