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Teen Poetry #7

your shadow

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2004-06-23 07:02 AM

your shadow is all i can see.
but i do not see you.
is it all in my mind.
or are you still there?
i thought you left me.
but then why do i still see your shadow?
it is all alone.
where have you disappeared to?
why is your shadow with me and not with you?
am i dreaming still?
or is this real?
come back and get your shadow and
and never return again.
for if i see you.
i don't think i could go back to the way things were.
so just take your shadow and disappear!

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-06-24 02:02 AM

I liked it...It really made me think about how things are in my life...good poem...Keep it up!

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

2 posted 2004-06-24 07:55 AM

"do u have to let it linger?...do u have to? do u have to let it linger?...."

reminded me of that song. great poem, something most of us can relate.

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2004-06-25 03:45 AM

i like the last line best =)
bergundy

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

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