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tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2004-05-19 10:18 PM


Of all the things of this earth
that I treasure above all,
you are it my angel,
it's for you that I fall.

flying around my heart,
leaving me in a daze,
making my emotions
a wonderous maze.

The smile of an angel
plays upon your lips,
sending shivers down my spine,
right down to my finger tips.

I fell for an angel,
a God given gift,
something He sent,
to give my heart a lift.

Your halo is a symbol,
of your perfect love,
of which you gave to me,
another gift from above.

Of all the people
you could have given it to,
you gave it to me, so now
it's my turn to give to you.

Here is my love, my angel,
take good care of my heart,
I will treasure yours forever,
from it I will never part.

Erin

Not that great prolly I know. I was just thinking of my love...I can't talk to him for a week so I'm thinking of him alot. He calls me his angel so I though I would write this to tell him how I feel. Let me know what you think!


"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

© Copyright 2004 Erin - All Rights Reserved
Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 149
Washington, USA
1 posted 2004-05-19 10:33 PM


Very sweet!!! I love it so much!
Keep it up!

Riley
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in the pouring rain
2 posted 2004-05-20 07:27 AM


simple and sweet....
perfect
riley

no matter what i'll always love you
i swear

Rommance_Touch
Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97

3 posted 2004-05-20 01:19 PM


Nice, i liked

~~Romance_Touch~~
  ~~Not_Ended~~

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
4 posted 2004-05-20 06:52 PM


wowowowwowowww....i loved it keep it upp..love and respecttt

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

nikiah87
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since 2006-06-22
Posts 8
Indiana
5 posted 2006-07-07 04:42 PM


Tapper-

I love the way you write. It's so real. Keep up the great work!

*Ash*

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