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Teen Poetry #7

An Aching Feeling

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2004-05-17 09:55 PM

An aching feeling,
For you to be near,
To know you are by me,
To know you are here.

An aching feeling,
To look into your eyes,
To see them shine,
The eyes that wouldn’t lie.

An aching feeling,
To feel your arms around me,
Taking away my fears,
Making your love all I see.

An aching feeling,
To feel your lips against mine,
To feel your love through a kiss,
The love that’s so hard to find.

An aching feeling,
To feel you next to me,
Another dream in itself,
A second heaven it’d be.

An aching feeling,
To see you right then,
Tell you how much I love you,
Knowing I don’t have to pretend.

An aching feeling,
To have you physically here,
To be without you now,
Is my one and only fear.

-Erin
This is about my love, I love him so much and last night I just wanted to be with him so badly I ached, hence my poem! let me know what you think!

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
*~Erin~*

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-18 12:21 PM

WOW, this is exactly how I feel at this moment! I miss my boyfriend so much, its killing me not being able to see him. Great poem I can relate to it so well...Keep up the awesome work!!!
*Thumbs Up*

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-05-19 06:54 PM

*sweet*

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

3 posted 2004-05-19 07:37 PM

This totally relatable . . . You perfectly described how I feel at this moment. Good job!

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-05-19 08:55 PM

aww.. wow. This is so sweet. I know how you feel. I absolutely loved it.
kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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