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...Where were you...?
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...Where were you...? |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131
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...Where were you... Where were you when you realized that you were all alone? And where did you always run to when I needed you the most? I said I would always be there "Thats a disappointment like everything else" You took for granted the fact that I cared, Disappointed only yourself, When did you find your heart? Where were you when you started to care? It only hurts when you've lost it all, scared at the thought of me not being there, But now you want to talk, All I ever wanted was the truth, Want to work things out now? That was always too much to ask from you, Your timing was always off, and now your just a little late, Add the words you wish you said to the demise you helped create, Where were you when I was scared, you had my heart clenched in your hands, Squeezing tighter as I fell, to meet all of your demands, Weakened by your control, making me think that I was wrong, Your faults were only hidden, it's you, It has been all along, I need to be away long enough to realize I don't need you anymore, You'll always be the same, but you can't hurt me like before, Leave me behind, and pick up where you left off with someone else, Forget everything we had, forget all the feelings we felt, Let me let you go, please don't try to bring me down, I think this time I know, what we lost cannot be found, Nothing lasts forever and I'll never own anything to you, Best friend that never cared? Best friend you never knew, Where were you when I let go, Why can't you do the same? Timing was never our thing, Why don't we end this pain? Waiting for the day to come where we both can finally forget, Waiting to be able to tell you, your my one regret, Throw memories away of all the things we ever knew, Please won't you give up on me, Like I have given up on you...? |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
It saddens me to read this and hear the truth behind your words...Nicely done, very powerfull. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
good job...its sounds like this is about a boy/girlfriend but i can relate this to my sister...sounds very truthful! Love is like quicksand, the deeper you fall the harder it is to get out |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
WOW! that was great.but made me sad as well.i wish the story didnt have to end that way but in life,things dont go as we always wish now do they?i hope,truly hope that soon true love will come ur way and this pain u express so very well will be a thing healed.but here's a little advice for u...if it was love,it never will be forgotten only gotten over because love never REALLY ends. [This message has been edited by Star T (01-02-2004 09:36 PM).] |
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Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
Wow, that was a really awesome and heartfelt poem! i love it! ~*.:Leah:.*~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
thanks! its been a while since i have written anything....I'll be back for sure! |
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