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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
I'm not sure that you know How much pain you have caused All these tears I have cryed And this sorrow that I bare I can't go on Not anymore I can't pretend that it's all fine There isn't anything left it's gone I can't bare to suffer I can't seem to breathe I need rest I am so weak You take and take But you never give I wish I had another life to live I seek for guidance I recive no anwser Take my life Take this pain Take it all There's no one left to blame I go on But I suffer I breathe But I struggle Please let go of this grip that you bare Stop pretending like you actually care End my sadness Take away this madness Over whelmed I am to the edge I take a step forrward An inch even closer Yet it isn't enough To berid of this monster Now i've pushed myself further And the further I go Get this away Take this from me I am pushing you away But who am I really pushing I can't think I dont make sense I can't live on this way I can't bare another day Please give me the strength To move this enormous bolder To remove this burden That I am so sick of barrering End it now Or just not at all You leave me faded Worn out and worthless This is more then I can take It's all much more then I anticipated It's a constaint struggle A battle I'll never win There's so much more You can't see it all I want to use magic And hope you disapear The more that I see you The more that it's clear My emotions overwhelm me I can't controll this I have an impulse To want to scream Battered abusied Torn and tattered Tossed and shattered A broken fool A faded point in time A helpless nothing Take it all away See the evil that you bare Lay it on the table As you would with mine own Fade my hope Fade my dreams Fade these tears |
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sparrow139 Junior Member
since 2004-05-13
Posts 18UK |
"You leave me faded Worn out and worthless" I liked this line... The alliteration makes it really effective. Something about the rhythm is good too. I feel like I should give you a *hug* after reading that. Hang in there hon. If you need someone to talk to, you can always PM me. [sparrow] |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
Very good! I like it so very much. I hope things get better for you! Keep it up! |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Oh wow. I absolutely loved it. It was a beautiful.. looong poem. but it was worth reading. I think i will save this. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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