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colifer Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 37Ohio |
myst, rain, water, river leaves, grass, moss, plants. the forest rests, the sun goes down the moon does it's guardian dance light, shade, warm, cool breeze, wind, sound of pipe the sun rises, the forest stirrs... wipes away the crust of night. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
the forest rests, the sun goes down the moon does it's guardian dance It does seem as though the moon guards over the forest at night, doesn't it? A very good poem. I enjoyed reading it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Expressional and vivid to a "T". Without a doubt, I am amazed by this piece. The moon as a guardian is just a cool idea, and the whole crust of night just sets it off. Beautiful. NJS |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
i agree with mr evincar, the moon as a guardian is a great idea. good write. |
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Peeps-Peter Junior Member
since 2003-07-19
Posts 14 |
Very good, I really like the rythem. emotional. well done. ~Pete  |
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