Teen Poetry #7 |
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Why Junior Member
since 2003-09-26
Posts 32Middle of nowhere |
These tears that i cry, come through dry eyes Yet no one even notices, no one even cares They walk past me, as if i'm not there As if when i talk to them, i cause them a scare My words will never be repeated, cause this will Never be read Cause no matter what i wish for, i'll end up dead -Tiffany Belcher(my beautiful girlfriend) Poems free us and trap us all the same. But still they put our hearts at ease. [This message has been edited by Why (10-21-2003 05:57 PM).] |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Short, complete, very expressive, and quick to the point; all with a poisonous tounge lashing at those who may never care or understand. Very productive and needlees to say, great. NJS |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You said a lot in these few words..... and I did read...and heard. Hugs Ethel |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
good onnnnnnneeeeeeeee |
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Peeps-Peter Junior Member
since 2003-07-19
Posts 14 |
very emotional poem, I loved your choice of words. awesome job. ~Pete |
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