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SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

0 posted 2004-05-06 04:20 PM

Remember when
All we did was talk
Kiss and hold hands
Ignore the clock

I miss those days
where did they go
Instead of flirting
I see someone I don't know

I wish you could remember
I wish I could have known
And I wish we never hurt
Those seeds never sewn

Remember when
All we did was smile
Thinking of a wedding
Laughing all the while

Remember when I loved you
Remember when we cried
Remember when we first met
Your memories have died

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-05-06 04:26 PM

wow..this is a veryy good poem keep it upp sis

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-05-06 04:36 PM

wow, i likes it a lot. `lol` I love all of ur poems! ur a very amazing writer.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Snickers123
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

3 posted 2004-12-20 09:25 AM

I liked it, it was cute, nice job!

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-12-20 12:03 PM

this was really good. I felt your emotions....and this one sorta touched me....i think i will save.

Karissa

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-12-20 06:46 PM

Omg Sharlene! This is amazing! I can really realte to this. Please post something soon!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

6 posted 2006-03-01 09:42 AM

I liked it full of emotions. good job keep it up

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

7 posted 2006-03-01 01:25 PM

This was so amazing...there is so much emotions....it is very touching....amazing job!!

desert-spike
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 194
TX/USA

8 posted 2006-03-01 05:01 PM

Nicely done.

Strange, I too can relate to this, but in a non linear sort of way.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

9 posted 2006-03-01 05:29 PM

I like this poem. I see where you're coming from.
This one I believe had a really good flow but I like the words of the other poem that I commented on better.

Nice write

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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