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love is !!!!!! |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
love, is cancer that we never know how to fix. it kills us with its longgraph.. is a picture with so much colors that shines my eyes . isa bird withwings that makes it fly free .. is like drugs ,but even more than getting us dead. is a smile that never ends . is a name with a meaning. is my eyes that i see with. my body that i move with. is a dream ,that makes it real.. is a hope that make it feels. is my breathe that makes it sweet... .,my medicine that i need eveery now and then,, BUT till now your what makes eveything so perfect and a dream come true... even in my dreams you are real ,and in my heart your the sunshine that makes me feel like i want to live longer than i excpect to live... --------------------------------------------- p.s i wrote this poem a very long time ,,like 2 years ago,,,i hope you like it enjoyy and sorry about too much poems on ,,,i write alot..lolol..well enjoy it and hope you like it... lovezzz ***peace*** |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
this is one of my favorites of yours so far  !  |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
ohh thank u soo much for ur replies and honesty i really thank u ...lovezz peace |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
I likd this one...Keep it up!!! |
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Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
It was sweet, I liked how you compared it to things. Nice write! ~*.:Leah:.*~ |
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