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Teen Poetry #7

I LOVE YOU TOO!

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-04 11:13 PM

Never in my life ,
i have felt like i need you,

Never in my life ,
have i ever imagined of seeing you,

but you appreared and will alwayz be next to my dream..

Never in my life have i felt sad for being a girl with no brains but it really hurts to say i love you more..

it reallly hurtssaying it in a wrong time..wrong place,
wrong enviroment..

never in my life have i ever felt hopeless.
til the day has end and the trees have died..

like my heart has an end and my name has no taste..
like a flower that melts but never really exists..

never have i felt to say i love you too..but i guessyou hate me tonzmore...

so!!

why the promises?
why the lies?
why the tears?
why the dreams?
why the hopes?
why the smiles??

THERE IS NEVER GOING TO BE ME AND YOU.!!

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this is a poem i wrote 3 months ago,while i was going through alott ,,i hope you would like and ..and just be honest, your honesty is what i love to hear....even if it hurts lolol..jk ..welll see yea ..lovezzz

peace***

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-04 11:20 PM

Wow I really like this!
keep it up girly.

Snickers123
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

2 posted 2004-05-08 12:06 PM

I liked it! nice write

~*.:Leah:.*~

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