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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world 
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You Though miles may separate us, I don’t know the # to the exact. You still mean the world to me, There’s nothing our love lacks. Your caring and honest nature, Sings it’s own lullaby. It’s sweet tune carries on in my mind as the days go by. Your heart is twice as big As manys seem to be. To what many close their hearts to, You open yours up to see. Your mind, so beautiful, is full of love and joy. You have the decency and respect for me, You’d never treat me like a toy. Faithful, so perfect to me In every aspect are you, And the more I talked to you The more my love for you grew. Your kind words never Fail to brighten my day, Leaving me happy and utterly speechless I’ve never felt this way. Your words entrance my thoughts Making me smile to myself. You take away all my fears and All the problems I have dealt. I love our long talks and I hate the times we have to part. I think of you all the time, Your absence gnaws at my heart. Your loving touch is Something I have yet to feel. But in my heart I know that Our love for each other is real. Butterflies form in my stomach Just knowing you’re out there. Know you might be thinking of me, Knowing you’re the first guy who cares. Your compliments make me feel Like I’m on top of cloud nine, Talking to you for hours on end, It seems as if God’s paused time. Though you can’t hold me in your arms now, I know you will someday, You’ve melted my heart, branded your name, And no matter what happens, it is there to stay. Let me know what you think and if I can change anything. I'm giving this to him next Wednesday so plz let me know what you think! -Erin To the world, you're one person; |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww soooo sweet and such a gr88 poem ,,this poem reallly made me tear ,its soo sooo soo soo soo sweeet......keep writting please i would love to hear more....cya love and respect.. |
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Censored Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 86 |
Though you can’t hold me in your arms now, I know you will someday, You’ve melted my heart, branded your name, And no matter what happens, it is there to stay. Very cute  |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
wow that was fast! Thanks you guys! i really appriciate your replies! "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
very sweet and innocent. great job **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Fleur Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 103 |
That is so sweet! Are you going to give this to your boyfriend? This is awesome! Very romantic...  ) Sooo sweet... I loved it! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
WOW!!! I loved this poem. I'm gonna save it if you don't mind.  ~Alli~ |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Thanks so much for the replies! I gave it to him, I couldn't keep it in and he loved it! I was so happy! Again thanks for your replies! "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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