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Teen Poetry #7

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IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2004-04-27 10:28 PM

i can feel you cold against my
veins, pulsing water dreaming blood
less of crimson infusement seep cerulean
into darker shades of purity
the tune of truth alive in lines
buried 'neath my recollect
in a brackish sort of dew.

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

1 posted 2004-04-28 01:11 AM

I had to go back and read this three times and wow! I still have no idea what to make of this but the way that it just all flows together is amazing! Though I'm still pondering the meaning...it makes me think, I like it!
~Live and Laugh~

The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised.
~Bella~

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-04-29 09:44 PM

wowow.....nice poem even though its too shortt...but its good

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2004-04-30 08:30 AM

you have an amazing talent, and the depth that runs through this is stunning.....good to see you posting! hugssss dear...

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-04-30 08:28 PM

this may have been a short poem, but i felt every word! Amazing....You are very talented!!!

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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