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Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2004-04-18 02:15 AM

i think there is a girl I love
though maybe that is to strong a word
closest of friends are we
together through and through
then the other day things changed
though maybe only on my side
i think i am falling for this girl
this best friend of mine
and maybe i am the only one
who is feeling this way in our relationship
yesterday i started to tell her
then i thought better of it
what if it ruins us
ends what we have now
i feel so confused
i just don't know what to do
to tell my best friend the truth
or trudge through this pain
for the sake of prosperity

all that is said and all that is thought flows through the young

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-04-21 08:36 PM

I know it has only been three days but I can't believe no one has commented on your poem yet!!!!

I liked it (the poem) because it sounded like it came from your heart and that's the kind of poetry I like best.
Nice job! Can't wait to read more!

~Alli~

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

2 posted 2004-04-22 01:13 AM

i know i have been waiting and waiting but oh well anywho thank u for the commens

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

3 posted 2004-04-22 11:31 PM

i enjoyed this one because it was honest as well as mirroring the way that i wrote love type poems if that makes any sense

anyway enough of my rambling. the poem is good

nice use of muffin

UnsilencedWords666
Member

since 2003-11-19

Posts 63
Broken Memories & Falling Tears

4 posted 2004-04-23 09:50 AM

Loved this poem...::big huggins::well written...keep up the hella good work!

*~*nessa bear*~*

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-04-23 06:30 PM

I know that I already commented on this poem but whatever (the more the merrier right?

)
I just wanted to say that this same experience has beginning to happen to me the past couple of days. I feel the exact same way that you do in your poem, which just shows once again, that your poem really came from your heart. Once again, GREAT JOB!!!!

~Alli~

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

6 posted 2004-04-23 08:14 PM

wow...this was really good. i enjoyed it because it was honest. i really does hurt when you like your bestfriend...especially if you all are really close. so to say the least i enjoyed it...and i can't wait to see more..

always,
ri

no matter what i'll always love you
i swear

o yeah...and love is never to strong a word...if anything...its not strong enough

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

7 posted 2004-04-29 12:19 PM

i like that you write about loving her.. and at the same time, still in the process of falling for her. like it incomplete.. as love often is.

and.. to me, love can be too strong a word sometimes.

Censored
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 86

8 posted 2004-04-29 10:09 PM

Nice write

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

9 posted 2004-04-30 12:15 PM

i like it keep writtin

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