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Teen Poetry #7

Problems

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-04-26 05:14 PM

Problems that last.
Problems that we see and cant control.

Problems that are'nt ment.
Problems thatmakes us swiming in a ocean full of sharekskilling youslowlyy and slowly.

Problems that we all have every single day ..
Problems we can recall death,

Prroblems that are not ment to distroy but can realkill you.. with people who never understand and soo impatient..

Problems that we look at but never know what to do or how to fix..

PROBLEMS is what we have every single day that we cant control unless wedie...

ALL WE HAVE TO DO IS FIGHT THEM AND BE STRONG TO BE SUCCESSED BUT IF THAT NEVER WORKES I SAY JUST SMILE TO THE WORLD AND YOU WILL BE NUMBER 1..[ONE]

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-04-26 06:29 PM

I really like your poems...I just CAN'T stand your spelling errors. No offense but you always have alot in your poems.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-04-26 11:02 PM

its alright ,i dont mind i love it when you all tell me the problems sir so dont worry about it soo its alright...please keep replying and telling me what wrong with my poems and i will try more i promise thanks ...

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