Sparring Among Youthful Eyes

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Teen Poetry #7

Sparring Among Youthful Eyes

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-04-25 10:13 PM

this is a new style of poetry. check it out.
Throughout
     These
               -red eyes
The night,
(Its hair falls out to me)
[Tomorrow soaks into
baths lukewarm.]
The bird's wings and
     Color coaded feet
          Attacks the scene.
And the moon scrapes
(And slides down the blackboard)
[Only lukewarm is warm
Enough not to steam]
Back inside paradise, forever
     pressing the ground
          And no one knows what this means.
No,
No more of this confusion
(It's a fake night again)
[And tidal waves crash against
Rocks of sounding boards]
So sleep with lidless eyes, staring
     into nothing of worth
          But anything is nothing to no one.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2004-04-26 04:22 PM

i would like someone to comment on this, don't be daunted by the form

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