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people say but how can i? |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
people say i have the brightest star of all. people say i have the most intersting thing of all. butwhat is it?? they say your beauty makes me wanna die,as i smell the most beautiful flower that makes me dizzy from its heavy smell. i ask ,how can i have a beauty with a dead heart? they say your beauty is different from your heart..even though you dont dress up or put on make up. but you are the most cutest thing of all... i ask how? im no star im no flower im no nothing but an empty heart. they say look at the mirror and what do you see, i say i seethe empyt flower with no color or smell.. .. i see noone but anempty sight.. but look closley they ask ,?? now what DO YOU SEE?? i see me and my love are ONE...... but whats the use ,me and him are'nt ment for each heart.. ---------- hope you like it.... ::^love^:: |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
im nothing but an empty heart'' ~~ no, you are full of heart and love, and if he cant see that you dont need him....  hugsss you write your emotion well....chin up it will get better~~**~~ |
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Fleur Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 103 |
Very Cute POE!M Liked it a LoT! KiSSE!S |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Loved it(!!!)..... ~Alli~ |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
mmm...it was good. little jumpy but good i'm sitting in the dark....waiting... |
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