Teen Poetry #7 |
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magazine faces |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
pretty face on a magazine. dirty fingers turn the pages. so determined to point out the contrasts. try not to look at the clock, time is irrelevant. moments in the childhood folly, the things I held so dear, let them go, they mutilate my image altogether. I tend to vomit emotionally each time I see you. my heart is red and ozzing, I wish I had a reason for all my words vicious consumption of flesh. Take a sip of my artificial, factory produced love. Perhaps the product of your magazine dreams. all I carry is generic, and ugly. But in reality, that's what beauty is made of ...is it not? [This message has been edited by Lexy (04-22-2004 05:09 PM).] |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
wow... this is different. Unique, i love it. Amazing write. Kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
wonderful.... ![]() ~Alli~ |
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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
amazing no matter what i'll always love you |
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drummerboy678 Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 134 |
Wow, this is great! Seriously, awesome write. "Take a sip of my artificial, factory produced love" My favorite lines. Maybe try to change a couple of the cliched lines, like the "knives", but really, dont change much. Great write! |
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Sass Junior Member
since 2003-05-10
Posts 21 |
lexy...as always I admire your poems. You are amazing and so talented. I love you honey. keep up the good work. and call me! ~Kassi |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
i love this one. adoring pages of artificiality, even i am guilty of that. funny how the brainwash goes. good job. |
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UnsilencedWords666 Member
since 2003-11-19
Posts 63Broken Memories & Falling Tears |
wow-this was really well written...keep up the great work You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~* |
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loner187 Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 106Upstate New York |
Amazing...I, too, am a fan of your work. You always write great stuff, so emotional and unique. What if the hokey pokey is what it's all about? |
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