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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going 
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a stream of consciousness poem with a nature theme The sky is gray and spread across this colorless canvas always unchanging and lifeless complimented by a tan carpet worms crawl freely beneath the carpet and cry out their whispers of joy to be free bare trees thrown down in random threads of the carpet only to be stripped naked of their coverings and no one complains of their indecent exposure. the unseen cold thief sprint witht these coverings never to be brought in for questioning or a complimentary beating the cement river carries metal monstrocities unwillingly into a plane of nothingness or to the gas station. all while i vegetate in a prison cell with a large red exit sign above the door like i typed above, this is a stream of consciousness poem so it's just alot of random thoughts. hopefully they make some sort of sense to you guys. well i hope you like it. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this reads like a story, is there more? ~~**~~ |
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