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Teen Poetry #7

the only thing

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2004-04-16 07:25 PM

i've fallen so many times before and cried for you
these bloody tears are staining my face
i close my eyes and i'm lost
everything i knew has been taken from me
it seems like i am alone, the darkness my only comfort
music the beats that resound in my head
i can't control my body
convulsions take me over
i turn to see you standing behind me
watching me suffer in this so called life
you won't come towards me, yet you won't walk away
you choose to do this to me
i'm screaming out
i can't hold this pain inside anymore
someone remember me tonight

i'm sitting in the dark....waiting...
waiting for you to see me.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-04-17 03:01 AM

niceeeeeeee poem...i love it keep it upp....

::^Love^::

wishing on a star
Junior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 19
sleeping in my warm bed =)

2 posted 2004-04-17 04:28 PM

love it ri....keep it up chik!!
xoxo <3~Chloey

young naive & vulnerable to the world

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

3 posted 2004-04-17 08:12 PM

I like it the emotion is really hard not to miss...I’m going to put this into my library if you don't mind...keep writing!

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2004-04-19 12:29 PM

I really love this poem. You got your emotions across perfectly. I can relate to this one. And I could feel your pain.
Thanks for sharing, this one's going in my library.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

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