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Teen Poetry #7

I feel so.....

aRiEsAnGeL
Member

since 2004-03-04

Posts 53
Florida

0 posted 2004-04-17 11:27 PM

I feel so much anger
I want to scream
but,no matter how much I scream,it wont help me missing you

I feel so sad
I want to cry
but,no matter how much I cry,it wont help me wanting to be with you

I feel so empty
so empty of happiness
but,when im happy,it goes away when we arent together

I feel so alone when youre not with me
when youre with me,i am a somebody
when im without you,i am a nobody

I feel so attached to you
more attached to than anyone else
no one will ever steal my heart the way you did
our love is real,I know

I feel so good
allowing myself to know you are mine
mine to love,mine to care for,mine to be there for when you arent well

Please know that I love you
and always will!
To My Jerome

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-04-18 03:37 AM

sweet write

he's a lucky guy

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

2 posted 2004-04-19 12:04 PM

It didnt flow right to me, but I still liked the whole cocept

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

3 posted 2004-04-19 10:29 PM

this was sweet, but i agree, the flow was a little edgy. Aweosme concept though.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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