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Teen Poetry #7

A Reflection on a Year

tzaddiqim
Junior Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 15

0 posted 2004-04-18 10:32 AM

I wallow disjointed,
Alone, In Pain

Gasp as I can for life,
Can’t see,
Can’t find my way home,
Can’t feel myself

Who am I, and why?
I used to know,
But then I fell,
Left all I knew,
Now I know not

Why does it hurt?
Why does it always hurt?

I remove the pain.
But at what cost?
I am still lost,
Worse than I was before,
Than ever before

Taken all that I am,
I cannot stop,
I cannot breath,
I cannot

Yet.
I struggle on,
I see no light,
Just keep trying,
One Day

wishing on a star
Junior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 19
sleeping in my warm bed =)

1 posted 2004-04-18 10:47 AM

nice job!! i like it!! keep it up!!
xoxo <3~ Me

young naive & vulnerable to the world

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-04-18 07:31 PM

very nice!!!

~Alli~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2004-04-19 12:27 PM

Wow. I love this poem so much. Not one line was out of place.
Thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

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