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LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

0 posted 2004-04-08 04:41 PM

Its been quite a while since i have been here so i figured i would start with the first one i ever wrote.

Your Touch

One touch and I was gone
You had broken through all my walls,
My barriers and defenses that kept my heart from knowing joy.
With that touch you changed my life and all that I would become.

That which I worked so hard to build suddenly came crashing down

I was a dead man among the living knowing neither love nor hate.
I as I walked my path in loneliness I thought I knew my fate.
But you changed all that with one touch of your hand.

As people sought to change what I was I put up a front
I would turn on those who came to close

I never knew what life was like, I never even cared.
But then you came along and your touch you shared.
The chains about my soul were shattered

I can now walk among the living
Now I may begin to live, to love, to feel again
All because of that one touch

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2004-04-08 09:12 PM

I don't see how you don't have any replies yet because this poem is beyond beautiful! This piece is goin' in my library, for future reading! haha

Thanks for the read, I REALLY enjoyed it. I'm gonna look for more of your poetry. ~Jess

Kiss, n. A word invented by the poets as a rhyme for bliss.

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-04-08 11:04 PM

I'm glad you re-posted this. It is very amazing. It's good to know that guys think about things like that...~lol~

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

3 posted 2004-04-15 09:49 AM

That was absolutely great.optimism is the way to enjoy life.its interseting how we humans can shut life out even though we're in it.but its a big relief when that touch is felt and the dark walls fall flat.love ur poem!

Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

4 posted 2004-04-22 12:42 PM

so beautiful and heartfelt...I know exactly this feeling, I felt is myself earlier this year and although that man has just left my life, I still am thankfull for that first beautiful touch that broke my barriers and taught me to breathe, thank you for reminding me of that.
~Live and Laugh~

The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised.
~Bella~

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2004-04-22 02:46 PM

Magnifique. C'est très merveilleux.

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2004-04-28 06:16 AM

Simply Wow.

A life without love…is no life at all.

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

7 posted 2004-04-28 07:22 AM

this is amazing....
i know what that one touch is like...
although my world is becoming smaller and smaller after reading this the walls have retreated a bit.
thankyou for sharing this with us again.
keep up the posting
Mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????
i am who i am. no one can change that but me, even then it will be a fight to the death

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

8 posted 2004-04-29 03:14 AM

*deep breath* beautiful

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

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