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Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2004-04-13 01:05 AM

Does anyone ever know,
what the man never tells.
Those things that he feels,
or those thoughts that he thinks.

Does anyone ever care,
when the man hurts.
when his heart crushes
in the iron grip of despair

people carry on
with life as they would
ignoring the pain
that a man feels

with a heart born to love
yet without a recipient
with pain neverending
and the eternal front

does anyone know
what a man feels
what he doesn't tell
is what he does feel

all that is said and all that is thought flows through the young

UnsilencedWords666
Member

since 2003-11-19

Posts 63
Broken Memories & Falling Tears

1 posted 2004-04-13 06:38 PM

I like it becasue it adds a different edge to, what seems to me, a heartbreak or depressive sounding poem...very cool...

*~*nessa bear*~*

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

2 posted 2004-04-16 01:20 PM

thank u very much i love it when people enjoy my work

all that is said and all that is thought flows through the young

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-04-17 04:07 PM

well actually i liked it but the only this is im soo suprised to see men like ethat i mean ,,they hurt girlzz soo much ..but why dont they tell there feelings if they reallly feel ????...i respect u and ur poem and i truly did but i wish to understand just 1 .....

thanks :-]

wishing on a star
Junior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 19
sleeping in my warm bed =)

4 posted 2004-04-17 04:26 PM

well i liked it lots... i wish i knew what guys thought sometimes... geeze ... they keep everything to themselves i swear!! niiiiice job tho!!

xoxo<3~Chloey

young naive & vulnerable to the world

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

5 posted 2004-04-17 08:09 PM

I really liked this poem(being a guy and all,hehe) it is hard dealing with emotions when the society that we live in(at least mine)puts such a heavy burden on being tough and not showing any weaknesses for some guys it is easy because they are hopelessly lost in that and have no emotions to speak of...grate post...keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

6 posted 2004-04-18 02:08 AM

its proven that in our society men are raised to pretend that they have no emotions even to the point that even they might not know that they feel things so deeply, women or viewed as emotional beings men as physical beings it really is sad, and i just felt like showing what i feel in a poem

all that is said and all that is thought flows through the young

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

7 posted 2004-04-29 12:15 PM

i like that girls think boys can't have emotions. it used to be normal.. a shame, really.

and i like this. and your writing. as always. or almost, at least. =)

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